Real-time writing help
The Copy Walkthrough
Consultation. Chat. Coffee date.
Call it whatever you want—this is your hour.
You checked “write brochure” or “write web page” off the list. But how do you know if it’s going to do what you need it to do? Or what if it’s been live for a while and the response is stale like yesterday’s coffee?
Let’s put 60 minutes on the clock and walk through a piece of your copy together, line by line, goal by goal. I’ll ask the questions your guests are thinking, call out what’s confusing or clunky, and offer real-time ideas to make it more magnetic.
You're an hour away from...
Clear feedback for a message that sells
Tips for readability & persuasion
An action plant to turn your copy into a conversion heavyweight
How does it work?
- After your purchase, you’ll get a link where you can share your current copy and a little background about your business.
- You’ll also get a link to my calendar where you can schedule your video call.
- We meet, we talk, we tweak, you win.
craft a clear, persuasive message that sells
get expert input on a new or underperforming asset
Talk through a tricky piece of marketing copy
For the hospitality or lifestyle brand
that needs to...
For the hospitality or
lifestyle brand
that needs to...
Perfect for:
Event/product descriptions
Venue brochures
Press releases
Web pages
Hotel room descriptions
Sales emails
And just about anything else you can think of (up to about 500 words).
Whatever it is, let's look it over together and see how we can bring a little magic to your message.
Why I offer this
Because I'm tired of all-or-nothing.
I hate hate HATE how service providers make you commit to a giant package—or worse, a never-ending monthly subscription—when all you really need is an hour or two of their time.
Honestly, why can’t a girl just pay to talk to a expert for an hour?
Well, you can.
- A single page of web copy (under 500 words)
- An email sequence or automation (up to three emails)
- An event venue or vendor brochure
- A sales page (under 500 words)
Got something else or a longer piece you’d like me to look at? Just drop me a note — I’m flexible.
Get in touch.
- Ideas for making your buttons and calls-to-action way more clickable.
- Notes on how easy (or confusing) it is to understand your offer.
- Suggestions for clearer messaging that connects with your ideal guests/customers.
- Tips for dialing up your brand voice so it sounds more you.
- Quick-win ideas for a better meta title and meta description for search results.
- Spots where A/B testing could be worth your time.
Nope—this is an audit, not a done-for-you writing service. You’ll get my recommendations, ideas, and fixes that you can apply to your existing copy.
If you’d rather have me rewrite the thing for you, head to my Services page and we’ll make it happen!
I totally get it. Instead of a live call, how about a written report?
With The Line Check, you’ll get an actionable, written report loaded with pro tips and recommendations. It’s a personalized to-do list to zhuzh up your copy and put it to work.
